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Short Story: Carmen's Family

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Narrator:  in a village close to Fushimi there lives a very interesting family. One is a of the family members is a Stallion Futakuchi-Pony he is a pastel blue colored he is a earth pony version of the Futakuchi-Pony and his mane and tail are black and his eyes are red he also has really sharp teeth and an extra mouth on his neck and his neck also has really sharp teeth and both have a long pink tongue and his name is Guitar, He lives with his wife a Unicorn she has a dark red coat and her mane and tail are pastel yellow and her eyes are blue and her name is Bell, Both the mare and stallion are 28 however the last family member is the one that sticks out the most, There is a 10 year old human girl with Mexican colored skin her hair looks like it is dyed red and she is in a neon colored pink shirt and dark blue jeans and her eyes are amber colored and her name is Carmen. They are called the Creed family and they live in a house that looks like a mix of Mexican and Germany style homes.

Bell:  *cooking some stew*

Carmen: *has a light Mexican accent* mommy can I go outside and record stuff?

Bell:  *has a french accent* sure thing sweetie just make sure to get back when I call your name.

Carmen:  thanks mom. *hugs Bell and grabs a small video camera before running outside*

Guitar:  *farming and sees Carmen recording him working he also has a french accent* hello sweetie

Carmen:  *using a narrator type voice* here we see a hard working man and we see him working for his family to feed.

Extra Mouth:  Guitar feed me!

Guitar:  *feeds his mouth with a carrot by using his elastic tail*

Extra Mouth:  thank you my hunger has been killed.

Carmen:  did you see that extra mouth surely a most awesome sight to behold.

Extra Mouth:  she is doing her narration again.

Guitar:  just pretend she isn't there.

Extra Mouth:  hard to do when she is right there.

Carmen:  *walks away and recording some Cardinals poking the ground* here we see the Cardinals a pretty rare bird species to see near this Village and also rare to see near Fushimi. Look at the pretty red feathers and it seems to be a family since I am seeing a Cardinal that has dull red colored. Did you know birds with dull colored feathers are females? I know it is so fascinating to learn. They are trying to feed.

Bell:  Carmen time to come in to eat!

Carmen:  *saves her recording and turns off her camera* coming mom! *runs back home*

Bell:  *eating lunch with her daughter*

Guitar:  *walks inside*

Bell:  hay honey.

Guitar:  hello Bell.

Bell:  so are you done working?

Guitar:  yeah I am done with today's work and it is time to spend time with my lovely family.

Bell:  *smiles and hugs her mate* love you Guitar.

Guitar:  love you too Bell.

Carmen:  am I loved also.

Bell and Guitar:  *hug her* yes we love you too.

Carmen:  *smiles*
Well an idea for an OC family hit me and I am going to write it.

:iconstarlollipop: owns the Futakuchi-Pony species

 I own Carmen, Guitar, and Bell
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